Art Club ネイティブの添削結果

I used to join an art club.

I used to participate in an art club.


"Join a club" means to become a member of that club.


私は実際に美術部員だったので、Joinでいいと思いますが、もしかしたら、be used to と相性が悪いのかもしれません。


Then I wanted to go to the an art university but this dream didn't come true.

an の冠詞を付け足されました。

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it から、them に変わりました。





I'm Overweight.

My fiancee and I have decided to have our wedding in June next year, so we think that I should go on a diet.

However, it's harder to lose weight now than it was before.

I suppose my metabolism is slower.
I gained weight--about 13kg!!-- with a free box lunch and lack of exercize last year.

Besides, I need to remove cellulite, but I can't do it by myself.

Anyway, I'm obese that I can't handle it by myself.
After discussing it, we decided that I'm going to get a slimming treatment.


PS : This book, under below, is very useful for keeping a diary!

I recommend it to you.









A Transparent Watercolor Mastering Operation

I prepared

"24-color watercolors".

"The coloring book written by Yuko Higuchi".

I'm ready for practicing with watercolors!


Oh, I fogot to buy paint brushes. XD

I like my paint, but I hate painting.haha

I need to start.


MUSEUM ミュージアム ヒグチユウコ塗り絵本

MUSEUM ミュージアム ヒグチユウコ塗り絵本



ホルベイン  透明水彩絵具 24色セット W405 5ml(2号)

ホルベイン 透明水彩絵具 24色セット W405 5ml(2号)



English Conversation Online

Although I stopped for a while, It has been several years since I  started taking English conversation lessons on online.

I had used Weblio, wirh a plan allowing me to use it  eight times a month, but I have changed Weblio to DMM, which allows me to use it every day.

This is because I felt I was making slow progress with the material of Weblio.

I'm weak at English vocabulary and grammar.

I wanted to learn grammar but I had trouble since it was very boring and difficult.

Now I'm studying "Grammar in Use: Advanced" on DMM with teachers.



They are glad to explain grammar during the lesson.

I wonder if my English is getting better.

I don't think to use English much at work, so I can't spend much money on English.

However, English is interesting, so I enjoy it every day!

By the way, I have a hard time pronouncing the 'R' sound.

When will I overcome this?

I want to be fluent in a global language.


PS : This book, under below, is very useful for keeping a diary!

I recommend it to you.









My Favorite Writer


My favorite writer is Fuyumi Ono(小野不由美).

Her masterpiece is "Shiki"(屍鬼).

It is a best seller.



She is famous as a horror writer.

However, she also writes fantasy.

I think "Ghost-Hunt"(ゴーストハント)& "The Twelve Kingdoms"(十二国記)are really good.

"Ghost-Hunt" is a horror novel, very scary.


ゴーストハント1 旧校舎怪談 (幽BOOKS)

ゴーストハント1 旧校舎怪談 (幽BOOKS)



The Twelve Kingdoms is fantasy.

It's the best novel I've read so far in my life.


月の影  影の海 (上) 十二国記 1 (新潮文庫)

月の影 影の海 (上) 十二国記 1 (新潮文庫)



I reserved a copy of Fuyumi Ono's new book!

I'm looking forward to reading it.

Natsuhiko Kyogoku(京極夏彦)is my second-favorite writer, but his works are so long - you have to be ready for that before you start reading them.


姑獲鳥の夏 (講談社ノベルス)

姑獲鳥の夏 (講談社ノベルス)



Do you have a favorite writer?

Who is it?


PS : This book, under below, is very useful for keeping a diary!

I recomend it to you.






My Favorite Beer


I don't really like beer in general exept for black beer.

I do llike to drink sweet alcohol but the black beer is my personal favorite.

It has a better taste.

I feel like getting a black beer now.


サッポロ 麦とホップ <黒> [ 350ml×24本 ]

サッポロ 麦とホップ <黒> [ 350ml×24本 ]