Unpacking ネイティブの添削結果

Ifinaly → finally

fiancee = female

fiance = male

luggage → boxes

luggage = usually means suitcases and other bags that you carry on a trip.

The day moving, → On moving day,

The next day, after working, I'm exhausted and got sleepy.

I shouldn't have pushed myself too hard and ruined my health.

→ I shoudn't push my self so hard, since that might  ruin my health.

ruined my health = you have a disease which you will never recover from.