Unpacking ネイティブの添削結果
Ifinaly → finally
fiancee = female
fiance = male
luggage → boxes
luggage = usually means suitcases and other bags that you carry on a trip.
The day moving, → On moving day,
The next day, after working, I'm exhausted and got sleepy.
I shouldn't have pushed myself too hard and ruined my health.
→ I shoudn't push my self so hard, since that might ruin my health.
ruined my health = you have a disease which you will never recover from.